USA Staff Aplication :)

Discussion in 'Staff Application Archive' started by CameronJSmith5, Dec 10, 2016.

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  1. KaiJordan_

    KaiJordan_ Dedicated Minetimer

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    No support.

    "Now I'll tell you about me". The whole application is meant to focus on you not a fraction of it, but you seemed to waffle on about factions or something which really tuned me out for a while.

    The application seems rushed in places, although the structure seems fairly good you lack so much detail it's unbelievable. Playing soccer is all well and good, but every point you make in the application needs to relate to why you should become a helper, or it's simply a waste of time including it. Why does being involved in so much sport make you fit for the role? Include that.

    Also you are a new member so maybe get to know the server and it's rules well first before applying, just a suggestion.

    Not bad application but not good either.

    Good luck.
     
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