Looks to have been rushed, a lot of mistakes. Neutral. Don't bump threads, especially your own. It looks very unprofessional.
Don't worry, I would definitely recommend using http://sentencechecker.com, to check for any grammatical and spelling errors.
Due to current situations happening outside of the Minetime network i will not be able to come online as much as i am putting my relationship and my Exams first so i am requesting for @Tlyer or @Pile to take this thread down, thanks