feedback please

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  1. Qurp

    Qurp Forum Enthusiast

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    So I started this castle build (obviously not finished) and I made one of the pillars, I feel like the transition from one design to the other is a little to fast and blunt. (I only want feedback on only the pillar, not the wall with glass on top)
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    #1 Qurp, Feb 19, 2016
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  2. Tigerien

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    Ew...
    Looks good! But, in my opinion, the top of the pillar should have a little more detail too.
     
    #2 Tigerien, Feb 19, 2016
  3. ManicMiner__

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    If you put some bits of wood on the top of the pillar in the same crosshatched pattern, it should fit in more nicely.
     
    #3 ManicMiner__, Feb 19, 2016
  4. RealNickonator

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    It's nice, but it's way too repetitive.
     
    #4 RealNickonator, Feb 19, 2016
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  5. Qurp

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    I didnt start on the top, the pillar itself isnt even finished, but thanks!
     
    #5 Qurp, Feb 19, 2016
  6. Qurp

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    I thought the same thing but im to stupid to know how to make it look different but still look good.
     
    #6 Qurp, Feb 19, 2016
  7. LordOfLegion

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    Looks great so far, although I do agree with @tigerishabyss6 on the pillar.
     
    #7 LordOfLegion, Feb 19, 2016
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    #9 Qurp, Feb 20, 2016
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  12. Chipemunk

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    Its great but UPDATE;try to add more detail on the roof DONE and try to do something different on each floor maybe extend the top floors a bit more out? add a bit more detail thats my tip but it looks like its gonna be pretty awesome
     
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  13. Qurp

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    I agree with the point about maybe putting different designs on each floor, but I think I have a lot of detail on the build already
     
    #13 Qurp, Feb 26, 2016
  14. Masterenderwolf

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    Perhaps try out for BuildTeam?
     
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  15. Qurp

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    lmao I tried a long time ago and it was so cringy, all of my builds were so bad but I got better so maybe.
     
    #15 Qurp, Feb 26, 2016
  16. Masterenderwolf

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    Well then good luck :)
     
    #16 Masterenderwolf, Feb 26, 2016
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