USA Staff App

Discussion in 'Staff Application Archive' started by Kappa, Jul 13, 2017.

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  1. PingPongGamer

    PingPongGamer Former Builder

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    Support.
    • Well organised application.
    • You're mature and seem very friendly.
    • I generally believe you'd be a good fit for helper.
     
  2. Kappa

    Kappa Expert Member

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    Thanks man
     
  3. battah71

    battah71 Forum Enthusiast

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    Very good application
    You seem very mature and have learned from mistakes.
    Sounds like you would be a good fit for this community ;)
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    Best of luck!
     
  4. Kappa

    Kappa Expert Member

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    Thank you man
     
  5. Software

    Software Member

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    Neutral
    • Extremely active on the forums
    • Haven't seen you in-game
    • Awesome app though!
    Good luck :)
     
  6. Chipemunk

    Chipemunk Expert Member

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    • You genuinely have seemed to matured since your past actions and have become a very polite and nice person to have in the community, I like your presence here.
    • You are active
    • Nice and mature application
     
  7. Goowy

    Goowy Expert Member

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    - active on forums
    - you seem cool
    - it's a cookie-cutter application with the "i am patient and responsible and kind and [ten other character traits]. everyone else who is applying is "patient and responsible and kind and [ten other character traits]. be interesting, stand out
    - some of the wording is weird. try not to sound like every other word is from a thesaurus
    i.e
    "aspects surrounding the community" is unnecessary
    word choice is repetitive
    this just sounds awkward, read everything out loud (also, understanding* not understand)
    - "previous experience" section is really vague. "Do you have past experience" doesn't mean "ramble about your 'extensive knowledge of plugins'". you mention "vast experience" but you don't name a single server you've been staff on?
    - few minor things
    "cloud" is capitalized as it's part of the name of the server
    mother is not a proper noun here
    don't know you well enough to judge based on character but those are just a few (nitpicky) things about the application itself.
    good luck!! : -)
     
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  8. Tigerien

    Tigerien Forum Enthusiast

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    I changed my mind due to the generally positive statements others have mentioned about you. Support!
     
  9. Kappa

    Kappa Expert Member

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    Thank you kind sir
     
  10. Sookarook

    Sookarook Expert Member

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    Hello TwoDeeGlasses,

    You have become inactive for more than 30 days. I will be locking your staff application. Feel free to create another application when/if you become active again.

    Kind Regards,
    The Staff
     
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