I'm far from perfect, and I do have floors. I had only listed traits that I acquire that would be helpful for the position of helper. No more, no less.
Very good thing to do in order to shorten the application. Support, he's a nice person, and very qualified for helper at least in my terms.
Neutral because you have traits, but you have detailed a lot of traits which seems like you put actual effort into your application.
I support you. Even though I haven't had the pleasure to meet you, I feel as you're qualified and ready for this job. As with any applicant, I like to give them some tips or suggestions on how to improve. This is in no way meant to make you feel down. I'm just trying to help you as much as I possibly can because I know you deserve this! Spoiler: Repeating First of all, you repeat yourself quite a lot under the "why do you think you should become a helper"-section. I think this might be because you wrote a long reasoning to why you want to become a mod and what qualifies you for this position. This isn't necessary to change at all! Just in case you didn't want to repeat yourself. Here is an example: Spoiler: Timezone Secondly, you state under "timezone" that there aren't many mods from the AEST timezone and that this results in an inappropriate chat. I know you have made a few reports on chat offences, but I would like you to prove your statement by making more reports regarding cruel language. Making more reports would also show your contribution to the server! Spoiler: Expecting a promotion? When I read your application you said: This kind of makes it sound like you expect to be accepted? It's good to feel good about your chances (as they actually are high), but I personally think it would be better to say that you wouldn't abuse if given the position rather than saying you will not. Just a recommendation Spoiler: Spelling Your vocabulary is really good, but I still find a few misspellings. It isn't needed to have an application with perfect spelling and grammar, but I think it gives a better impression to the reader. I'm not trying to be a grammar nazi. I'm just trying to help you out as much as possible
What you've said is reasonable and I appreciate the criticism, I'll work with the information you've given me to alter my application positively.
Support, Nice application, although, maybe shorten the paragraphs on the 'Why you think you should become a helper' section. It's a bit long and I doubt people would be bothered to read so many lengthy paragraphs.
Thank you. I feel that if I were to take information out, the application wouldn't be the same. When I had created my application I did it so I challenged myself, so I doubt I would alter information out, but I might merge similar traits together in the near future.
I would do the 'similar trait' merge. It would kind of shorten it a bit so it would get more people's attention, and probably get more support that way.